what genre do you think it is?
What do you like?
What do you dislike (What I could improve on)?
Does it look like a real film opening?
I wrote several of the interesting and critical points the audience fedback to me, but not all. There was a lot of people saying the same things...
What genre do you think it is?
I got audience feedback from 25 people in the target audience range. Out of 25 people, 15 thought the genre was a thriller. 12 people specified to crime or mystery thriller, whereas some of the 12 just wrote crime or mystery. I believe that with that feedback I was successful in putting across to the audience that my genre was a mix of crime/ mystery and it was a thriller.
other suggestions included: psychological thriller, horror, action and one person said fantasy!
What do you like?
. Good music, very professional
. Good atmosphere
. Camera work, shot angles
. The music and how it all fits together
. Black and white was a good idea
. Like the torch fading onto the title
. I loved seeing the scene from the outside of the shop
What do you dislike (or perhaps needs improving?)
. I didn’t like the soft focus- it seemed a little too fuzzy
. I couldn’t hear the actress talking on the phone very well
. There was little dialogue (a few people said this)
. Confusing… what was the point of the people in the office?
. Does the music fit? Is it not a little too uplifting?
Does it look like a real film opening? (you could comment on music, credits, titles etc...)
. I liked the fading in and out of titles, perhaps the red could have been a different colour
. Definitely very professional… I want to see more!
. Yeah, really does
. It does, but the mystery may stop people from understanding
. Credits and title are really good and professional.
Most of the comments were constructive and I was pleased with the different aspects I got across to the audience successfully. There are contradicting views on different aspects of my film. For example, some people believed the music fitted very well, whereas others did not think it went with the shots at all. I guess it is just a matter of appeal and taste to different people within my target age group.
Some people said it was confusing and the people in the office did not make sense. I believe in a media aspect I needed to add an extra scene to show the audience the whole film WASN’T in black and white, but I guess to the audience it may have been a bit puzzling. If this were made into a full length feature film I hope that the audience would understand some of the things that happened in the opening two minutes and the clues solved. However this is not the case, but on the whole, I believe the feedback was very positive.
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